A Review of Savages: A Triptych, by Brendan Ball (Available from Amazon Kindle)
To begin, a definition: “Triptychs”
are typically three-paneled paintings or a photograph series that explores a
unified theme in different ways.
The triptych of this
collection is three short stories: “Long Live the King,” “The Deposition,” and “Lunar
Seas.” Thematically, there could be several broad-based connections between the
three stories, as they each cover a range of human emotions and relationships.
Other reviewers have put forth their own theories. To me, the triptych here is
unified as Past, Present, and Future
explorations of what is most “savage” (read primitive, archetypal,
low-vibrational) in Humankind’s relationships to its dark secrets as they are
expressed in both our codified, societal Myths and the ones we individually
construct.
The
cover design, by Keri Knutson, creates
an initial unification of the stories by overlaying key elements from each on a
macabre human skull. The chosen symbols could be used as a start, if the reader
so chooses.
The first story, “Long Live
the King,” opens with a quote from James Frazer’s The Golden Bough, a large volume of comparative religion published
in 1890 that includes case studies on the world-wide phenomena of tribal kings
being ritually killed when they began to show signs of weakness, physically or
in the mind. The story is written
with a syntax that situates the reader firmly in the ancient world of ritual
and myth, which makes for a challenging read (almost like trying to read the
transcript of a dream-in-progress) but well worth the effort expended.
Frazer’s book also examined
rites of passage, which is another unifying element across this triptych.
My biggest takeaway from
“Long Live the King” is the idea that the kings of old were all too human in
their signing on, knowing the cost, and then resisting the contract to be
killed as the time drew near. It’s all too rare that this aspect of these
tribal conditions is explored; the only other instance that comes to mind is an
episode of Kolchak: The Night Stalker,
from the mid-1970s, in an episode guest-starring Eric Estrada.
The second story, “The
Deposition,” is a fun read in the tradition of C.S. Lewis’s The Screwtape Letters, where Hell is
situated as a bureaucratic nightmare where managers and case workers struggle
to win souls of humans that are just clever enough to sometimes win. Ball’s
story focuses on connection through the dream state, where various strategies
are employed to keep the Dreamer from realizing it is a dream, or waking up.
The story drips with the boredom and frustration of the average worker inherent
in so much British writing and music, from Douglas Adams’s Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy to The Police song “Synchronicity
II.”
The third story, set in the
Future, is a dystopian tale of an off-Earth colony where education,
relationships, and even one’s inclinations toward free thought are carefully
controlled by an oligarchy of corporate/government interests even more
intertwined than they are today. A little bit 1984, the film Equilibrium,
Ayn Rand’s Anthem, and Rush’s 2112 concept album, this story evoked
the clearest visual imagery for me. It is the stuff of which good film
adaptations are made. It has elements of romance, rebellion, and a terrible
aloneness made manifest in the main character. This is also the longest of the
three stories, taking up half the book.
As I have processed the
stories, and further thought about the idea of the triptych, I have come to
realize that the stories function like Russian nesting dolls, which accounts
for them getting larger as they progress, because the Future contains the Past
and the Present and the Present contains the Past, while the Past itself sits
alone and often disconnected, distanced from us through its archaic language
and rituals.
Which is, of course, not the
case at all, as this collection shows.
In Savages, Ball has accomplished a great deal in its forty or so
pages, not the least of which is showcasing his ability to write in a wide
range of voices, each particularly suited to the position of
Past/Present/Future and the needed tonal weight of the tale being told.
If you consider each story carefully
on its own, and then together as the triptych, you will find that, in all of
the desperate darkness in which the characters of the stories reside, there is
a speck of light, which, when followed deeply enough, becomes Hope.
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